Job Application: Via Referral
Job application
Hiring manager
Neutral
✘ Original Message
Hi [First Name], I hope this email finds you well. [Mutual Contact] suggested I reach out to you about the open Product Designer position. I've been working as a product designer for 5 years and am really excited about the work [Company] is doing. I think I could be a great fit for the team. Would you have time for a quick chat? Best, [Your Name]
✔ Best Rewrite
Hi [First Name], [Mutual Contact] mentioned you're hiring a Product Designer and thought I'd be a good fit. Quick background: • 5 years product design, currently at [Company] • Led the redesign that improved activation by 35% • Portfolio: [link] [Mutual Contact] can vouch for my work on [Specific Project]. Worth a 20-min chat? [Your Name]
Micro-Yes Line
“Reply 'yes' if you'd like to connect.”
Why This Lands Better
- Led with the referral--social proof matters
- Specific achievement (35% activation improvement)
- Gave the mutual contact as a reference
- Portfolio link lets work speak for itself
- Clear ask (20-min chat)
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